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Candidate Requirements
Candidates must be able to obtain and maintain an Australian Government Security Vetting Agency NV1 security clearance (must be an Australian citizen).
Qualifications
* Degree qualification in Information Technology, Computer Science, or a related field, or relevant industry experience in Engineering or Information Technology that is transferrable to the security domain
* Information Security Registered Assessors Program (IRAP) certification or equivalent experience
* CISSP, CISM, or ISO27001:2013 Lead Auditor
Experience
* Knowledge in conducting security assurance activities against ISM or related information security policy frameworks
* Preparation of security artefacts (Security Risk Management Plan, Statement of Applicability, System Security Plan, System Overview Document, Standard Operating Procedures, Incident Response Plan)
* Ability to work under limited supervision to achieve assurance outcomes
* Strong analytical and conceptual skills
* Experience with Australian government and/or Defence sectors
* Experience in planning, analysis, development, and maintenance of security plans and deliverables for pre-certification or interim authority to operate
* Experience delivering security assurance services within agile projects
* Knowledge of contemporary technologies and cybersecurity service delivery at the solution engineering level
* Experience conducting threat modelling
* Experience working within enterprise technology delivery teams