The job description is generally clear and contains relevant information, but it can be improved in terms of formatting and conciseness. The additional content about acknowledging Indigenous custodians and company addresses is not directly relevant to the job role and can be removed to focus on the essential requirements and responsibilities.Here's a refined version focusing solely on the role's requirements and responsibilities: Candidate Requirements Candidates must be able to obtain and maintain an Australian Government Security Vetting Agency NV1 security clearance (must be an Australian citizen). Qualifications Degree qualification in Information Technology, Computer Science, or a related field, or relevant industry experience in Engineering or Information Technology that is transferrable to the security domainInformation Security Registered Assessors Program (IRAP) certification or equivalent experienceCISSP, CISM, or ISO27001:2013 Lead Auditor Experience Knowledge in conducting security assurance activities against ISM or related information security policy frameworksPreparation of security artefacts (Security Risk Management Plan, Statement of Applicability, System Security Plan, System Overview Document, Standard Operating Procedures, Incident Response Plan)Ability to work under limited supervision to achieve assurance outcomesStrong analytical and conceptual skillsExperience with Australian government and/or Defence sectorsExperience in planning, analysis, development, and maintenance of security plans and deliverables for pre-certification or interim authority to operateExperience delivering security assurance services within agile projectsKnowledge of contemporary technologies and cybersecurity service delivery at the solution engineering levelExperience conducting threat modellingExperience working within enterprise technology delivery teams